
Spring Fever
Spring fever is contagious
drinking after another day’s dew,
salty sensations,
sharing rings around the moon.
Ripens her with purpose,
the eggs will all crack soon.
She was bit by the frost,
but it couldn’t kill the bloom.
Spring Fever
Spring fever is contagious
drinking after another day’s dew,
salty sensations,
sharing rings around the moon.
Ripens her with purpose,
the eggs will all crack soon.
She was bit by the frost,
but it couldn’t kill the bloom.
Another good one, thanks. Optimistic.
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Spring forces these cheerful things. Glad you liked it.
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short and smart, ending with a gorgeous couplet π
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Thanks, John. Very kind. You should definitely use that same line next time you’re picking someone up.
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LOL
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π π
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Love the poem. Succinct and image sweet.
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Thank you for the kind comments. I enjoy brevity. Makes the best lines stars. π
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