Lake Sarnen, Switzerland

Dear Celestine,

Cliffside like half-sheared sheep,
clouds that diffuse when steeped,
steaming out the sky as snow, white-out
retracting your mountainous glow.

Oh Celestine,

The whole hillsides been bourgeoisied,
a golf course of putting greens,
your lake an evaporating puddle,
a watering hole for the overpowering jungle
barely reflecting back peaks and sky,
the unseen picture frames of our lives;
the wrapping paper of our dreams.


This poem is written for for Sarah’s Poetic’s topic on d’Verse tonight, which is the color blue. I was in awe of the blue mountains, sky, and lakes of Switzerland and that inspired this verse thinking about how blue frames everything.

33 responses to “Dear Celestine”

  1. I enjoyed your epistolary poem, especially the lines:
    ‘clouds that diffuse when steeped,
    steaming out the sky as snow…’
    and
    ‘your lake an evaporating puddle,
    a watering hole for the overpowering jungle’.

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    1. Thank you, very much, Kim.

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      1. You’re welcome. 🙂

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  2. ‘…the wrapping paper of our dreams…’ YES!!

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    1. Thanks, Ron. Hope you receive nice presents that way as I do. 😀

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  3. I am smitten by the last two lines and the photo you’ve illustrated your poem with. We are planning a trip that includes Switzerland in 2023….yes….we look that far ahead! This makes me want to shift it sooner on the calendar! 🙂

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    1. It was breathtaking there. I just enjoyed the view, cowbells, crickets, and kind people.

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    bourgeoisied, … how I love that word! Sad to think of the golf greens and the shrinking puddle, Happens everywhere, sad to say,.

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    1. Thanks, Beverly. It felt like the most majestic view this past weekend , but also that it was changing, and not in a good way.

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  5. Beautifully penned. Thank you. 💜

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    1. Thank you, Jen. 😀

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  6. Cliffside like half-sheared sheep … love that.

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    1. Thank you. One of my favorite lines from this view as well. 😀

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  7. Many people sit and watch the TV. To sit and watch this would be a dream come true. I love the photo!

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  8. We do tend to spoil things. The natural world does not heed our “help”. (K)

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  9. I liked blue as the wrapping paper! What a gorgeous photo, definitely the hillsides have been bourgeoisied! 😍

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    1. Thank you, Tricia. Feels true and the sad, also.

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  10. There’s definitely a blue note to this piece:

    ‘The whole hillsides been bourgeoisied,
    a golf course of putting greens,
    your lake an evaporating puddle,’

    And now the glaciers are melting too. We’re doing our level best to destroy paradise.

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    1. So sad, yes, and such a beautiful pallets we’ve been given to inspire us.

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  11. a beautiful sad poem: the first and last lines are stunning: I would almost kill for lines like those 🙂

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    1. Best comment. Thank you, John. I’m blushing and also making a mental note to hide all sharp objects around if we were ever write in these same space. 😉 The hillside made me do it,really, after a good few hours of being mesmerized by her.

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      1. it is good to be mesmerized by good things and occasionally by ‘naughty’, transgressive things like the art work of John Currin —

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  12. Wonderful blue hue of verse K!

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  13. As always, with your poems, I find myself wanting to read it again and sop up those fabulously raw and perfect lines with whatever morsels of memory my brain still retains. Another beauty!

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    1. This one was like a dippy egg; one location I wish I could soak up again and again. Thank you.😀

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  14. Lovely poem, and a killer last line!

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    1. Thank you very much, Sunra.

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  15. It was the gold courses that stuck in my mind, and the clean, tidiness of it. The Swiss are very tidy.

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    1. Yes, they seemed to be, even their hillsides. Thank you, Jane.

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  16. I love how you address this to Celestine, I can almost imagine this to be written on a postcard… (after all on postcards the sky is always blue like that)

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    1. It felt like being in a postcard there. Dreamy, and Celestine-the perfect female blue name, I think. Thanks, Björn.

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