
Kiai! Spring is a Black Belt
startling the woods awake.
The hinge of earth’s axis
bends in salutation to Master Sun.
Spring shakes ground, splits boards,
startles hibernating snakes from their dens
with moves that express confidence.
A flower garden grown in self-defense.
Pitter-patter footwork, rainfall in perfect time,
Spring is the victor in gallant lime.
© 2023 | K.Hartless
“Promised” off of Quinnie’s new EP, Flounder
Wonderful lively verses bursting with color! 🙂 This tribute to Spring was a real treat to read :<3
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Thank you, Tom. Spring has moves, and I’m truly glad you enjoyed a few of them. 💜
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Your poems moves and meanders beautifully! ❣️❣️
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Thank you for these kind words. It was a strict assignment of the lines and fun to make spring so sprightly. 💜
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You are so welcome 🤗 yes, and you did that so well!!
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Beautiful lines and love the pics K.❣️
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Thank you, Cindy. It was written with a 10 line maximum, but that seemed to bring out the best in this one, I think. 💜 I appreciate you reading and commenting on my work.
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Perfect job! It’s always a pleasure🥰
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that is why march 1
or march 21
cmon spring
sproing already eh?
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Spring encroacher. Winter’s worse poacher. 😉
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Really love this. My favorite line is “A flower garden grown in self-defense.” I love the idea of Spring coming with a black belt to kick winter to the curb. We are ready!
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