~After Jessica Winter
A sequence of steps,
physical bodies in motion
shadows reconnect.
It may be ballet or jazz,
our canon of action,
a breathy breakdance.
retro, folk or techno,
unexpected unison.
Its outcome a surprise.
Whether desired or despised,
real love is improvised.
© 2023 | K.Hartless
Yard Sale of Thoughts 
where do you come across these interesting characters? I looked her up, watched the video: glad I did. She follows her own path; I like your rendition of the song: fully agreed: ‘real love is improvised’ 🙂
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Thank you, John. I like new music, so I listen to new music blogs on the way to and from work. She was a fun find this past week. Decided to put on her music and pick up a pen, it was as easy as that. Thank you so much for the positive feedback. I agree, improvisation makes for the best romances.
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I’m enjoying this blog and your taste in music ; you introduce me to acts I usually wouldn’t come across; well done 🙂
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Thank you. I am so glad. It’s my own little space to share my secret inspirations and break all the rules. I am glad you enjoy sailing by my yard sale, John. I’m lucky to have you as a fan. 💜
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we are on the same wave length; we support each other’s writing 🙂
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I love this!
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Thank you, Jason. I’m glad you enjoyed this post.
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You’re welcome
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Yes, and yes 🙌 💖💖
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Your poems do move me in rhythm and dance!
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How wonderful. 💜💜Thank you. 💃🕺
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Improv?😱 (cowers under the covers)👏😊 🎧 Also, you find the best songs!👍
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This improv message seems perfect. So glad you enjoyed this track. 🪩
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A very interesting take on real love. I enjoyed the poem.
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Thank you. I enjoyed crafting it. So glad it resonated with you. 💜
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Powerful verses here on blooming love – great song choice that fits beautifully too! 🙂 ❤
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Thank you, Tom. It’s great that some things don’t require forethought. Here’s to the blooming of new stories and friendships this spring. 💜
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Well said. ❤ Hope you have a lovely weekend! 🙂
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You, as well x I’m headed to the zoo today. Do you think they have an empty cage ready for me? 😂💜
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They’d better prep a full garden enclosure with its own pond 😉 ❤
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Indeed. A waterfall isn’t too much to ask, is it? 💜🧜🏻♀️
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Glad you enjoyed my previous story 🙂 hope it wasn’t too lengthy or overfilled with characters.
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Definitely not too long. I think it’s one of those stories that might sit on the grill and a few things might slide off, but the end result is a delicious dinner. I love the idea of those milk maidens, and the entire setting is super compelling.💜
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Really thrilled it stood out for you! 🙂 I tried experimenting with a few different descriptions and worldbuilding, so if any passages resonated with you, I’d love to hear your thoughts!
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Well, of course, I loved the underwater imagery of the bar. The description of the manager and the dancers. I think that was my favorite part. You’re such a wise wordsmith. Not a syllable wasted, which I love. I liked the idea of untrustworthy partners, but I think some of the #411 could be stretched if it was a longer piece. Like a bit firehose-like in some areas. I prefer to sip these sorts of things…💜
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Glad those different aspects resonated so well with you! ❤
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Very much so.
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Absolutely love the last line. Beautiful work.
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