
I stirred when you jumped
into my grave.
Would we be instantly intimate
or would my heart
need to be exhumed?
My body swoons awake.
I stirred when you jumped
into my grave.
Would we be instantly intimate
or would my heart
need to be exhumed?
My body swoons awake.
“My body swoons awake” Love this, K. So beautiful π
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Thank you, Grace. π
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My pleasure π
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Beautiful words, K.
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Thank you, Jeff. π
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Always. π
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wow ! this is short and punchy; a terrific opening line: gothic and passionate —
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Thank you, John. I had someone say to me, Iβd jump in your grave and weβll, itβs where this came from.
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wow,that person must have had ‘the hots’ for you; no one’s ever said that to me π¦
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It was a bit romantic, but also a bit creepy in that sort of βIβll never let you goβ way.
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Fantastic!
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Thank you, Bob. I appreciate this.
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Powerful and tender tribute for enduring love, K! Short and sweet verses π
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Thank you, Tom. This poem is almost as short as my free time this weekend. π But it’s all okay. Thank you so much for passing by.
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love ‘my body swoons awake’
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Thank you, Beth. I appreciate it. I hope I can swoon awake on time tomorrow morning. So tired here. π
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Oh, K. this is beautiful in a very good way!! You are so talented in your craft! I am a big fan and will try my best in writing a poem for this picture prompt or the sentiment of the title!
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Thank you. I am so grateful for your words of encouragement. π
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You are so welcome always!! I get so excited when I see a post from you! ππ€
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So kind. The sort of thing that makes me grin and grin. π
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Wow. This is really beautiful.
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