The ocean’s yawn is never-ending,
jaws gaped,
shore defending.
It longs to nap the whole day through
but morning rays scold the youth,
escort it swiftly to its dune,
for it must learn it’s not polite to snore,
and slothfulness will not be ignored.
The weary tide grabs hold of mother’s hand
resigned to rest a while on cool, grey sands.
Β© 2023 |Β K.Hartless
This is just so special and preciously delightful. Love the imagery and personification of the sea and the youthful nature of a young child! πππππ₯°
Reminds me of my two year old godson and one year old goddaughter!
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Thank you ever so kindly. I wrote this poem in my journal with my own daughter napping on my lap. I love those moments where all your tasked with is listening. Iβm so glad you enjoyed this one. ππ
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You are so welcome π π
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Love the description of the ocean yawn, soo good!!
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Thank you, Tricia. π
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This poem beautifully captures the energy and personality of the ocean π. The personification and use of imagery add depth and playfulness to the piece. Great work!
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Many thanks, Ritish. Usually when I make it seaside, Iβm depleted. The sea nourishes me and this poem I think speaks to that need to rest. π
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My pleasure ππ
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Hey K. You’re so good at making those rhymes and near-rhymes work!
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Why thanks, Lex. I resist the rhyme but it seems to cling to my verse. Iβm glad you enjoy it.π Iβd like to be able to contain it more at times.
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Well you often hit the sweet spot between resistance and indulgence π
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perfect pairing !
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Thank you, Beth. Iβve never slept
Better in my life than seaside.
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Really enjoyed the contrasting personifications you explored here using such charming imagery – lovely peaceful piece, K! π
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Thank you kindly, Tom. I wish I had more days to dawdle away at the shore, catching imagery. π
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There is so much I love about this poem I wish I could have written it myself. The sea is always tugging at one’s heart. Thank you K.
Sandy ________________________________
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