
Late fall leaves
Scrambling
Crippled
Black asphalt listed
Deserted
Recently homeless
Begging their parent trunks
for mercy
Divorced from branches
Whispering to the wind
Or anyone that will listen
about unpaid aleafmony
No one believes
Late fall leaves.
© 2022 | K.Hartless
My Recycled Twitterverse
brilliantly inventive metaphor, and a scathingly sad last few lines’ ; love the photo too
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Thank you, John. Cheers to the changing of the seasonal guard. I have my red wine in hand and had planned to write many more pages this evening, but find I have an end-of-week empty mind. I really appreciate your comments.
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pleasure, K; this one struck me as particularly clever; I’ll have a glass or two of red in my hand in a few hours; and that might be the end of my creativity — or the beginning 🙂
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Very nice piece. I love fall and the leaves. The photograph is stunning. ❤️
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Thank you, Joni. 💜 It’s so magnificently beautiful in Virginia this time of year. It’s breathtaking. This week, many leaves around here lost their lives, though, and I was happy to capture a bit of it.
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Dear K.Hartless,
I concur with Joni. What an eye-catching and colourful photo it is! Thank you. The photo conjures up vividly a dynamic autumn scenery involving falling autumn leaves in all their glorious colours. I am going to resonate with the spirit of your photo and poem musically. After all, those colourful leaves remind me of the 1945 popular French song “Les feuilles mortes” (literally “The Dead Leaves”) sung by Edith Piaf and Yves Montand with music by Joseph Kosma and lyrics by poet Jacques Prévert, and later translated into English as “Autumn Leaves” by the American songwriter Johnny Mercer in 1947.
Included here is the version sung by Nat King Cole. It is indeed a very nostalgic song. I hope that you like it.
Thank you for composing this latest post of yours as we enjoy the final month of autumn in November.
Wishing both you and Joni a productive November and a wonderful weekend doing or enjoying whatever that satisfies you the most, whether intellectually, physically or spiritually!
Yours sincerely,
SoundEagle
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Dear SoundEagle, Thank you so much for this message of connectivity and shared musicality. I am sipping my red wine and listening. It’s been too long since I heard this one. The drama, the cascade of sound. So perfect for this moment.
May your weekend be filled with inspirations and enlightenments in whatever corner of the globe you inhabit. I think you for finding me here and connecting with me. I am honored, truly. 💜 K.
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Dear K.Hartless,
You are very welcome. Thank you for your lovely reply. It is indeed a pleasure to be acquainted with you and to read your current post. Moreover, I am delighted that you not merely like the song but also have heard it before. You do have a fine musical taste, so much so that I would like to inform you that I have featured some of the best of songs for the autumn season in one of my latest posts entitled “🌤️🌾 A September to Remember: Greeting Post-Pandemic and Post-Elizabethan Age 👑🏰 with Sapphires, Asters, Poems and Songs 💎🌼📜🎶“, which also mentions and features the late Queen Elizabeth II in a special way. For your convenience, the link is:
https://soundeagle.wordpress.com/2022/09/30/a-september-to-remember-greeting-post-pandemic-and-post-elizabethan-age-with-sapphires-asters-poems-and-songs/
Please enjoy to your heart’s content. I welcome your input since I am curious to know what you make of my said post as well as your perspectives on those contents presented in my post. I look forward to savouring your feedback there!
Once again, thank you for your photo and poem, the latter of which conveys so much even though it is short and sweet.
Yours sincerely,
SoundEagle
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Thank you for this kind invitation, SoundEagle. I look forward to your fall offerings and also connecting with you musically in the future. Cheers to more sweet melodies. K.
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Very striking and unusual metaphors here of the changing seasons – your clever verses paint a powerful picture here. K! 🙂
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Thank you, Tom. I hope to have some real reading time this weekend among the damp decay of leaves. Tea and back porch quality time. Let’s hope my wishes come true. 💜
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Hope the weather favours you! ❤ Sounds like a good Mood 😀 🍁
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Indeed. A few more lines that when written seem like magic and in a way, it’s good enough for me. The fake gold of a fall sunset. 💜
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Gorgeous metaphors and imagery. Wonderful , K 💕
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Thank you kindly, Grace. This season has a lot of lessons for us. I try to see each person/leaf as valuable. I appreciate your comments, very much. 💜
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My pleasure, K. Beautifully stated.💕🙏💕
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The wordplay is outstanding. Gorgeous piece, K. 💜
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Why thank you. I was able to be out in the forest again today where more words found me. 🍁🍂
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You’re welcome, K. A glorious place to be, the forest. I’m moving across town to a place that backs up to the forest. I’m very much looking forward to it. 🍂🌲
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That sounds like a great idea. Then you can hear the ocean when the leaves rustle.
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A beautiful piece of imagery in words K! ❣️
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Thank you, Cindy. 💜 I wanted to write something about all the orphans I was wading through and it was good to let this one gush.
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Nice!!!!!💗
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