This week’s Petite Pen was inspired by an AllPoetry brevity contest~25 words or less to the following paint-night image. Will you join me for a sunset on the beach? If you bask in a bit of brevity be sure to ping it back to my page, so everyone can enjoy it.
Happy Tuesday!
Your voice tickles like
seagrass at sunset,
covering curvy dunes,
and beyond our blanket
the velvety ocean,
custard cream
cool and smooth,
awaits our dip.
© 2022 | K.Hartless
Yard Sale of Thoughts 
This was gorgeous, K! Loved those sensual descriptions sprinkled throughout 🙂
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Thank you, Tom. I miss the ocean sunsets already. Sigh. Will plot my next return.
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gorgeous was the first word that came to my mind too, Tom… How lovely, KK ❤
sincerely,
David
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Thank you, David. The beauty of words is that ww can travel back to then anytime. 💜
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Wonderful! Tasty too. ❤️
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I love a cool sunset dip. Fingers crossed I can make it to the shore again before the weather turns.
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A lovely little piece K!
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Thank you. Maybe if I click my heels together three times…nope, didn’t work.
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Beautiful picture and your poem is lovely, too. Love the title – delicious
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Thank you very much, Debi. Beachside for sunset is the best dessert of my summer.
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Wonderful, sensual imagery.
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Why thank you, Nitin. Nature is a breathtaking muse.
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Your words are beautiful, K. 💜
liquid gold spilled from the sun
a place of brevity, respite
and love, awaiting
the tangled emotions
called down from above
Wonderfully fun. ☺️
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ok, took a shot at it. attempted to ping back … but i’m new at this. hoping it works! thanks for the prompt 🙂
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Mmmm – this is so tactile, I can feel it! Gorgeously done.
https://writingwhatnotsblog.wordpress.com/2022/08/10/ebbing/
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Thank you, Marion.
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You had me at the first line, loved the voice tickles like sea grass, oh that is good and I can feel that “tickle!”💖
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Thank you.💜
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My attempt: https://yourplateormine967244485.com/Resting/Sun/2022/08/10/petite/pen/
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Hi, I’ve not been able to read your link. Would love to see what you’ve written.
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Oh, I hope this link will work better. I see that the other link is not opening. https://yourplateormine967244485.Wordpress.com/resting/sun/2022/08/10/petite/pen/
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