World’s Largest Spitting Cobra discovered in Kenya, 2013
Nobody talks about saving Naja ashei,
big-headed Sub-Saharan hussy
plops her eggs
on the local vegetation;
their rot is her gain.
She spits for several hours
contracting muscles around her
grooved fang.
Enough snot to kill fifteen men,
she sprays savagely;
her love is necrotizing.
Nobody turns away from Naja ashei,
her pale slender belly swivels
on the pole of a stranger’s tree.
She’s an arboreal acrobat,
never dry,
her fine rain burns freely
spreading legions
faster than daybreak;
her show,
all vertigo,
straight jets to wide eyes,
pulsing paralysis,
before she graciously
lets her victim die.
No one is nastier than Naja ashei.
Forceful, fierce, plucky,
she rears up undisturbed
to take a bite,
if not a sucky.
Deadly damage in her aim
she disfigures the damned
as they scream her name.
A dark fate,
it’s always too late;
her poison spreads
among unweeded garden beds,
and while the tourniquet
drains the veins,
be prepared to amputate.
© 2022 | K.Hartless
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Naja is a nasty customer! I like how you wrote the text in a snake-like paragraph.
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Thank you. She’s totally terrifying. A formidable foe. Thanks for commenting, John. Staying cool, I hope.
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Interesting structure and content. Nice work, K.!
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Thank you, Michele. To have such power and personality, a deadly combination, indeed.
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Lovely winding layout – great depiction here! 🙂
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Thank you. She has too much energy to sit still on the page, so I’m very glad the form was pleasing. 💜
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a stunning piece; I like the slithery layout of this —
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Thank you kindly, John. I thought I’d experiment as it’s not my usual thing, but it was fun to let the words slide around a bit.
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it worked 🙂
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Toxic and terrifying – wonderfully crafted K. Love the coiling shape.
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Thank you, Marion. I’m glad I took a risk and slithered this one. 😁
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