This 4th of July weekend, I struggle with my own patriotism. Am I a respected member of this nation? I wanted to share some of my recent verses for the special occasion.
BBQ’d
This weekend,
question the corny cobs,
grill the meatheads
high on homegrown, misogynistic courage.
Prayers mixed with mother’s potato salad.
Make fear the foreigner
so that when he arrives at your doorstep,
you do not recognize him.
Plea of Insanity
To plead insanity,
I need to hear voices,
stillbirth my bad choices.
Monumental marriages
dissolved into mud-throwing divorces.
Plead insanity to these lifetime appointments
sewn shut orifices
all stitched up,
we canβt sing the anthem
or even be in the chorus.
Supreme Syzygy
Each court case catastrophe
eclipses the other,
a syzygy of rigidity.
Two powerful father suns
and a cold mother moon,
aligned in strategy.
Supreme authority,
a conservative assault;
bow your heads in forced prayer
to the judicial occult.
I love this and share your sentiments. πππ
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Thank you so much for reading these small poems and for this message, Colleen. π
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We all have to stand strong together. β€
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I really like these, especially BBQ’d
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Thank you so much, JYP. Our family BBQ has lots of interesting conversations going on, and I’m doing my best to stay cool.
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You are 100% patriotic to call these out. To make your country better? What more noble goal could there be?
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What a wonderful thing to say. Thank you, Mr. B. It’s not easy to be outspoken and to face head-on intolerance and prejudice. I appreciate your encouraging words.
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Well, you make it look easy. Must be all those years of practise π€£
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Indeed. I do better behind my pen than in person.
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These were such beautifully-phrased and withering criticisms of the USA’s sorry state today. You’re absolutely right in tackling them head on & drawing attention to how far things have fallen. β€ Plea of Insanity was a standout piece.
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Thank you so much, Tom. I find it best to write about whatever burns and thatβs what Iβve done the past week or so with these little brevity poems.
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Feels better to let it out rather than keep all your frustrations bottled up inside β€
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Strong words for troubled times, K.
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Thank you, Ingrid. In some ways, Iβm able to pen the things I cannot say, and it feels really good to put them out there like nunnery own fireworks, really.
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is it harkless or hartless
kat or kath
boy or broi
sufficient to the day it s own evil
and the nation free and yet not
anymore
p o l a r i t y
thanks to t r u m p
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What a fabulous collection of poems! These lines burned out at me the most: “Make fear the foreigner
so that when he arrives at your doorstep,
you do not recognize him.” Powerful!
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Thank you, Jaya. I am going through it these past few weeks. I try to keep politics separate from my art most of the time, but itβs just not possible right now. I really appreciate your comments, friend.
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Very well written, cleverly expressed. Good for you for writing them. β€ββ€
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Thank you so much, Carolyn. I appreciate your support. ππ
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Love the last two lines of Supreme Syzygy. Great work!
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Thank you. We had one of those recently and it seemed to align so well with what was happening. Letβs hope it doesnβt happen again for a long time. π
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Those are all visceral and deep with meaning and emotion, K. I celebrarte and honor you for sharing these with us. Itβs the perfect day for this share.
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Thank you, Jeff. In the past, Iβve written about missing America or my hopes for the nation on this day, but this year, my verse was disbelief and heartache. I am so grateful for you encouragement and support. π
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Youβre most welcome, K. Your feelings are completely understandable. Itβs a scary time in this country right now. Itβs my pleasure to support you, dear friend. Always. π
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Thank you for expressing in words how many of us are feeling today, you do it so well!
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That’s very kind, Tiff. It’s heartbreaking to feel this way as I’ve always had such a deep love for my country.
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Can feel the anger and frustration in your words, K. Powerfully expressed.
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Thank you, Marion. I wrote them over a few days just like volcanoes these little verses. I’m glad I got it all out.
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I hope the next election. The women control the vote and I hope they remember. Get rid of the career politicians. The old fat men must be fired. Put in people, who have concern for human rights and women rights. I will research myself too, the people running for office. Dear K. Hartless. Time for us to unite.
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Oh this is lovely. Thank you, Coyote. The only thing that can stop a free fall is a wide net of hands. I hope we have that here in the US and that we are saved from ourselves.
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I agree my friend. We allowed old rich men to run our government. Time for new men and women to change our world.
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