
More Than These
More than Tita’s keys
and the Ferris wheel birthmark
below my Havana Gold knee.
More than secrecy,
smoky Cohiba eyes,
more than these.
More than my country and
the pale-necked galliwasp
in my chest that is striking as
hummingbird hues of dawn
streak colors like lightning.
Ay, more than right or wrong.
More than the striped tiger
decapitated in its youth.
The subway of my future commute.
My mariposa orchid blooms.
More than light,
and more than truth.
A candela burning, but
I no longer mourn.
La Milagrosa no more.
Blind, but now I see.
My uterus, my prized possession.
My most sacred part,
no more concessions.
© 2022 | K.Hartless
This poem features the rich artwork of Danelle Rivas. Be sure to view her entire gallery for further inspiration. “El Camino de Esmeralda” is shared here with the author’s permission.
Powerful and heartfelt words, K! Brilliant work 🙂
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you, Tom. I enjoyed penning this one. I’m so glad it resonated with you.
LikeLiked by 1 person
why would there be?
your body
your choice
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you. I appreciate this comment.
LikeLike
np. nice to read a real pro s work
LikeLiked by 1 person
Your flattery is welcomed with open arms. Thank you.
LikeLike
my pleasure. i hope you will follow. i ve read you so to speak and keep coming back. what else can i say?
LikeLiked by 1 person
there is a poet is for you. have a nice day
LikeLiked by 1 person
What a powerful, necessary poem! I love the accompanying artwork you choose; it is as empowering as the writing. ❤
LikeLiked by 2 people
Thank you so much, Jaya. The words poured out, which doesn’t always happen and so I knew it wanted to say something that needed to be said.
LikeLiked by 1 person
❤️❤️❤️
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you, Jim.
LikeLiked by 1 person
😊😊
LikeLiked by 1 person
A beautiful and well-crafted poem, K, and gorgeous artwork. 🌹
LikeLiked by 2 people
Thank you kindly, Michele. I’m so glad you enjoyed my poem and Rachelle’s artwork. Her gallery is full of inspiring works.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Truly an incredible poem so well done K! 💖👏👏👏
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you, Cindy. 💜I appreciate your kind comment.
LikeLiked by 1 person
You’re so welcome!! 2💖💖
LikeLike
I love the way you’ve connected your powerful words, and this powerful and gorgeous painting to create an experience for the reader that is multidimensional and courageous. No more concessions, indeed. 💜
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you so much, Jeff. She wears her story, and it was a privilege to try and pen it with some accuracy and courage. I’m so glad you enjoyed this one. It was made doubly special by connecting with the artist. 💜
LikeLike
Wow! This is fabulous, K. Such a powerful expression of enough is enough. Amazing artwork. I had a look at her gallery – fascinating work.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you, Marion. I agree. Her talent is definitely inspiring. I was thankful to find her works through the poetry magazine, Rattle.
LikeLike
Beautiful artwork and amazing poetry my dear friend.
LikeLike
Reblogged this on sketchuniverse and commented:
♀️🌍♀️🌏♀️🌎 MARCH, 8 . LET’S SPEND OUR DAY WITH ABSOLUTE PRIDE.
LikeLike