A little brevity to take us through Thursday. A petite pen request. 30 words or less to Ron Hick’s painting, ‘Impulsive.’ If you feel inspired, follow your impulse and pen me something beautiful and brief.
A Strong Specimen
You grew on me
somewhere in Central Park
beneath tupelo trees.
Park bench luncheons,
cold-snap complaints,
one-way conversations,
sour lips.
Strange,
but beneath sunny
skirt, a late bloom,
glossy honey.
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Love the gradual thawing of their interactions here, and that last stanza is positively STEAMY *chef’s kiss* ❤
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Thank you; I wanted to build to this impulsive moment, so I’m so glad that it worked for you. 💜🦋
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You did a fantastic job ❤
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very sensuous —
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Thank you kindly, John. That image. It’s that splurge of emotion captured.
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Enraptured and ensnared
Love dared
Caught together
A silent kiss
Underneath this
Our tree of bliss. Wow, that was fun. You’re poem is awesome, K. Love the ending. 💜
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Amazing! What beautiful brevity. Oh, thank you, Jeff for sharing this here. Your petite pen really captures the secret of the moment. Did I mention, I love it? 💜💜
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Ah! You’re most welcome. Always. Aww, thank you so much, K. 💜💜
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You’ve made my day, again. Ty for writing with me.
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💜
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You are a prolific writer!
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Thank you. It’s my dream, so I am chasing that butterfly. I enjoyed your playlist today, EML. 🦋
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Good one ☝🏻
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Love this K. I have also had a stab – ’twas fun!
Unaware I was a fraction,
Until now.
Is this what calculus observes ?
An ever-moving swirl of impulse.
My world for this brief moment
Fitting me to one sweet kiss.
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Oh, delightful mathematical impulsivity. 👏👏I love how your mind thinks. 💜 beautiful line breaks. Thank you for penning and sharing this. I truly love it.
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That’s so kind. I enjoyed doing this. Thank you for the invitation to join in.☺️
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I may have to keep this petite pen going. So much lovely brevity appears. 💜 Thank you again for joining in.
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Thrilling ending there. Wonderful.
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Thank you, Lance. Brevity brings out the best in me, sometimes.
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I wonder… was she wearing panties? 😉
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Love this thought. It’s definitely debatable. 😊
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🙂
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