
May come as a shock!
It might surprise the lot
that I’ve no interest
in the everyday tot.
Rather talk scabies,
their pustules, and their spread,
than butterball babies
who’ve just held up their heads.
Done talking littles,
their potty training days.
Tantrums and spittle,
green vegetable spray.
Those days are long past,
I’m happy to report.
Farewell to infancy
raise your knife, spoon, and fork!
© khartless 2022, All Rights Reserved
NaPoWriMo #15 Ask us to write about something you’ve absolutely no interest in. I decided to try a new format, a Breccbairdne, which is an Irish quatrain. Have you heard of it?
Here are the basic guidelines. I’ve included more rhyme than is necessary.
- Quatrain (or four-line stanza) form
- Five syllables in the first line; six syllables in the other three lines
- Each line ends with a two-syllable word
- Lines two and four rhyme
- All end words consonate
Good one, K, it goes so well with the grouchy baby! ❤️
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Ty, John. I’ve raced the whines for wine. 💜
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😎😎😎
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💜
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😎🎵😎
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You may not be surperised at my response…
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😂 not at all.
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I really enjoyed your breccbairdne 🙂
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Thanks, Art. It was my first, and so, I say doubly thanks.
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it is not an easy poem to write. I wrote one not too long ago. https://wordpress.com/post/storiesbizarre.wordpress.com/3167 Over Hum of Crickets. I am not sure you saw the post so here it is again.
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you are surely versatile!
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Thank you. So many styles to slip into. The fun is finding a good fit. 🦋
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yes indeed! it is fun seeing you have so much fun…lovely vibes
Did you get my last post
https://thepoetic1.com/blogs/
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💜
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Laughing out loud at this.😂
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Oh wonderful; perhaps I should write more about the things I don’t care about. 😂😂
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Don’t care if you do! 🤣🤣
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😂😂
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Nicely summed up 😉 ❤ Great pithy verses here!
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Thank you. It’s wonderful to not care about something anymore that used to consume my every waking minute. 😂 What things are you no longer interested in? 💜🦋
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Keeping up with the latest fads & my social media. HUGE peace of mind now I’ve quit that years ago. 💜
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Does this count as SM? I started twittering in 2019, but I conceded other SM, and never cared much for fads.
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I’d say it’s more constructive SM, yeah (like Twitter 😉 ). Being happy in your own headspace rather than comparing yourself to old school mates’ rose-tinted lives on FB or IG.
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Cheers to that. Never IG, but I agree it’s a keeping up with the Joneses sort of thing. Strange sort of lifestyle voyeurism.
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Ha! What fun to read. I do like babies, I must say, but only because I can hand them back once we’ve cuddled! 🙂
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