He looks at me with sunset eyes,
tree veins branched from lack of quiet,
and the early death of day
goes unnoticed by
the white anemone,
lovers teardrops in disguise.

© khartless 2022, All Rights Reserved

A bit of brevity for a contest~30 words or less hosted by Joanna Garrido.

18 responses to “Sunset Eyes”

  1. Lovely and thought provoking in its complicated simplicity. 😊

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    1. Thank you kindly, Gypsie. I missed this somehow, my apologies for the delay.

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      1. No worries! I’m always late for everything – I seem to have no concept of time management!! You are most kindly welcome K. 😊

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  2. good 😊😊

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  3. a lovely, bright start to the day 🙂

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    1. Oh, thank you, John. I hope it’s a sunny one.

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  4. This was incredible, K! Beautiful tribute to the oncoming spring, with such exquisite images you craft here! ❤

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  5. Lovely, and I like the art too, I visited that site!

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  6. Exquisite verse, K. The artwork is also stunning.

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    1. Thank you so much, Jeff. Yes I thought so as well. Cheers to a wonderful spring weekend!

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      1. You’re welcome, K. Always. Ah, thank you. It’s going to be sunny here, I think. Is wonderful. Cheers to a wonderful spring weekend to you too!

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  7. Really lovely. Somehow nostalgic.

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    1. Thank you, Bridgette.

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  8. Great title says it all 👏👏

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