The thick purple peel of clouds
reveal a startling green horizon,
a day that dared to sweat.
The fields all farmed,
fat off the vine, a drip of wet.
This sunset carries weight,
a bitter taste,
of things we know to be true,
but would love to forget:
an aubergine sunset.
© khartless 2022, All Rights Reserved
Yard Sale of Thoughts 
Beautiful!!
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Thank you It was a special treat this sunset.
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That’s so true things we know are true but would like to forget 👍
“Abuergine sunset” beautiful image
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Many thanks, Michele. I love delightful surprises such as these.
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Me too ❤️😁
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This is very lovely!!
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Thank you. A special treat that sunset.
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You’ve managed to write a lovely and original poem about a subject that I thought had been fully covered. Love it. Even the title is perfect at drawing one in.
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Thank you. These are such wonderful comments. I truly appreciate them. I find sunrises and sunsets to be endless in their inspirations. Just takes having the time to ponder these things.
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This is beautiful indeed, K. It was very original and loved the imagery of “abuergine sunset”.
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Thank you. Teaching in the evenings, I’m fortunate to take in these spectacular sunsets. They really have so much to say about so many things. I appreciate your kind comments, friend.
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Nice rhyming, K.
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Thank you, Hobbo. Sometimes I try to turn it off, but it just keeps flowing.
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It sure seemed effortless. 👍
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A deeply haunting poem filled with vivid memorable imagery. Beautifully penned, K!
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Thank you kindly, Tom. I found it on my way to teach evening classes, and well, like so many beautiful things, it does have a bit of melancholy in it. Cheers.
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Beautifully written. I echo Tom’s comments above – wonderful imagery.
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Thank you kindly. It was a most amazing sunset. Life is sweet like that sometimes.
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