The angel of dread covers her head.
If not, she knows she’ll soon be dead.
Spools of her Abaya unravel to threads.
Her shift gets shorter, she’ll soon be dead.
The boys like blackbirds ‘round her spread.
If they consort her, she’ll soon be dead.
She walks in daylight, buys Wali bread.
If out past curfew, she’ll soon be dead.
Been dealt decent cards without a spread.
If she shows her hand, she’ll soon be dead.
She’s writing stories that remain unread.
Whispers wisdom, she’ll soon be dead.
If Allah’s a woman, she’s sure unwed.
Or worlds of wisdom would go unsaid.
She must look down before she treads.
Belief’s a burden; fears must be fed.
Negotiate freedoms, plead and beg.
Wali lets her go walking, the living dead.
Bleeds to be bred, the angel of dread.
© khartless 2022, All Rights Reserved
Artwork by Amy Brown
Flashback Track #56 asks us to write about something we care passionately about. For me, this topic is women’s rights. In order for there to be a chance at equality, we must globally end male guardianship rights over women. Here is an article on the life of a woman in Saudi Arabia and also a recent article on the 28,000 women who applied to 30 newly opened train driver jobs (women were given the right to drive in Saudi Arabia in 2018).
Good sentiment in any case.
Bonus points for being able to express it in poetry.
I’ll have to rethink my own response to this – I was minded to go flippant but perhaps it deserves something serious.
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I wrote this poem a bit ago, but then your post. Well, it was its time.
Thanks, Mr. B.
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hey, I’m pleased to oblige!
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Fabulous piece, K. LOVE the flow. 💕💕
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Thank you, Grace. Sometimes a piece has more heart than head; in this poem’s case, that is definitely true.
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My pleasure . Absolutely .💕
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Yikes, I’ll stay away from her! 💀
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I am totally with you…great piece and great song…keep going 😊
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the rhyming and flow was awesome… a dreadful tale, like hope you brought different aspects and used metaphors… dealt decent cards without a spread, if she shows hand, she’ll be dead… really enjoyed reading this
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Dead good!
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Indeed. Thank you. 😊
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You touch on so many important realities in this write. It is a powerful poem, beautifully expressed. Completely agree with your ending commentary too. 💜
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Thank you kindly, Jeff. I wrote this a while ago and thought no, sorry not posting this, as it has a controversial tone, but it has its place now and hopefully spark more conversations. 💜
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You’re welcome, K. Always. Ah, I completely understand, and am super happy you posted it now. Important. 💜
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I just watched Honour movie last night and this poem is so fitting and haunting and powerful 👍❤️
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Oh, I haven’t seen that one. Will have to add it to my list. Thank you. 💜
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It’s on Britbox via Amazon Prime
Very good and short 1 hour 29 min
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superb
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😊
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I like! Good writing K 👏🏻
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Thank you. 😀
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Excellent!
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