Eight years together and the only true rumor I can spread about the man is that he has a Manchego grin. That’s all I remember, honest. His appearance beyond that, globulous, a geometric blur. Rectangular adam’s apple, often bobbing, triangular eyebrows, often arched, and a square nose, often turned upwards, but all of these are shapes without substance. My ex’s smile, it is a moon wrapped in brown paper, no, a half-moon, as it neither waxed nor waned throughout the eight years we spent together.

Masculinity has a much longer shelf life, you see, and the sharp smell of his mouth was alluring to me in my younger days. His confidence was cheesy. Easy, the way a man ages gracefully, knowing that time will only increase his value. Yes, that’s my ex for you, pure machismo, and that one sure had a Manchego grin.


D’Verse Poets Pub: Prosery Valentine

Björn is host tonight, sharing the impactful poem Valentine by Scottish Poet Carol Ann Duffy, and asking us to incorporate her line, It is a moon wrapped in brown paper into 144 words of prose (or less).

Artwork: ‘Cheese Man’ by Alejandro Iturralde Arquiola

For some reason my post made me think of this super-silly song from April 2021.

46 responses to “My Old Manchego”

  1. Ha! Let the stinky cheese man go. Loved the play with geometry too.

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    1. Thanks, D. It was a fun, late-night frolic of a write. Only wish I’d thought to munch some crackers and cheese at the end of it. Thank you for reading and commenting here.

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      1. Yup. This imagery is so vivid that I’m craving some cheese and crackers too.

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      2. Oh wonderful. It is a favorite snack of mine, memories be damned. 😂 Thanks, JYP.

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  2. My ex’s smile, it is a moon wrapped in brown paper, no, a half-moon, as it neither waxed nor waned throughout the eight years we spent together.
    This is such a great use of the prompt! I love your post. The picture is great!

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    1. Thank you kindly, Dwight. I’m glad you liked this. It made me chuckle and well, I am a huge sucker for a cheesy grin. That hasn’t changed, even though this relationship is well passed its expiration date.

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  3. What an awesomely weaved story, K. I agree with Dwight, the use of the prompt = awesome.

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    1. Thank you, Jeff. I love a bit of silly. It’s hard sometimes to let myself be that way with my writing, so I’m glad you liked this little slice of life.

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  4. I’m glad that you are free of the cheese…

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    1. Thank you, John. I really love cheese, but this one, well his ego was moon size. 😉

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  5. Well written with beautiful video! 🙂thanks.☺

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    1. Thank you kindly, Priti. I was in a silly mood yesterday evening, so it was nice to just let that mood have a moment on the page. I appreciate you stopping by and commenting.

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      1. It’s my pleasure 🙂💕God bless you 🙂😊💕

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  6. Aiiie…as is said in French for ‘ouch.’….very powerful, and well-written. with underlying grit…a picture portrayed of someone I care not to meet….

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    1. Yes, well, I would also prefer never to see or smell this one again. Thanks for your comment, Ain. I really enjoyed your prosery piece this week.

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  7. Mr Cheese! Too many Bries! Great description, K.

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    1. Thank you kindly, Hobbo. He gruyere on me, but then the mold set in.

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      1. Don’t want him stilton your creativity.

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      2. I got real feta-up with him. He was a real munster after a while. 😉

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      3. Was he caught cottaging.

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      4. Right, he never even asked my Parmesan.

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      5. You win! This is getting too cheesy for words!

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  8. You are a fantastic writer, KK. This was awesomely rendered.

    -David

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    1. Wow, thank you, David. I let the silly slip out last night. Might do that more often. I really loved your prosery this week, the perfect surprise for this line. Cheers to all the great writing ahead, friend.

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  9. Wonderful writing, and Happy Valentines Day!

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    1. Thank you kindly, Rob. I’ve learned to nibble on these sorts of delicacies. Hope you had a lovely Valentine’s Day.

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  10. Writing any leftover resentments out of the system. And artfully so.

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  11. Cheese when associated with a face is never attractive 🙂

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    1. Yep, can’t think of a way either. Cheese nose, nope still bad. Blue cheese eyes, maybe a bit better.

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      1. Hmm, not when you know that the blue is mould…

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      2. Moldy eyes not so much; maybe a cheddar chin? Nope, I think I have to concede formage facial features are foul.

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      3. Yep. Though appropriate fro describing breath and feet 🙂

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  12. Could not believe how your Prosery imitated my life ~~~ same eight years, sharp smell/taste of his mouth, confidence/talent oozing, it’s been close to thirty years … I still remember.

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    1. Oh my, we’ve both been grated in the same manner. Amazing, Helen. Thank you for connecting with me and this piece. Oh, how slow these memories crumble, but they will one day, I hope.

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  13. I couldn’t help but think: ma-cheese-mo with that manchego grin. Such fun!

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    1. 😉 Oh, yes. Love it. Thanks, Sascha.

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  14. the cheese stands alone; great colourful descriptions. cheddar cheese rich in chuckles 🙂 our exes are good for something 🙂

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    1. Indeed. 😂Thanks for this, John. It makes me think of the novel, “I am the cheese” and yes, all exes should be processed.

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      1. hahahah 🙂 I taught ‘I Am the Cheese’ to my Year 10 students along with ‘The Chocolate War’, a Cormier double 🙂

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      2. He, I’ve taught it as well. A favorite. Leaves its mark. 😀It would pair well with “The Chocolate War.”

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  15. A wonderful description and a manchego grin work so well with the thought of a moon made of cheese. and cheese age to be stinkier… so at some point it has to go.

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    1. Yes, indeed. Thank you, Björn. Great prosery topic.

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  16. This is sheer poetic brilliance! I loved every word 💝💝

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    1. Thank you kindly. So
      Glad you enjoyed this spread. 😀

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