Of course, there was a time you didn’t always get your way. Back there when my heart was not so easy to invade.”

Tori Amos

“Hey Gorgeous,

can I get your number?”

We’d been raising armies of wit

all evening,

shots of something citrus fired,

unruly curls deployed as a decoy.

“Got a pen?”

I uncapped it with barred teeth

and scribbled beneath

Paynes: better off here

than across the street,

the dive bar napkin reads

with cheeky courthouse avoidance instinct.

#1 was all I wrote, the next battle

cry in my throat.

Anchors away;

retreat isn’t always defeat.

The dance floor’s where young girls

find their fleet.

Saw you years later,

cocktail lounge subdued.

Goatee, that was new.

You said, “Hey, I think I know you.

The chick who gave me the #1.”

“Like the middle finger.”

I laughed lifting mine,

a loaded gun. “Glad it stung.”

We gave our cigarettes a flick,

toasted the things that stick,

the calvary of age and

the tactics of our wild ways.

© khartless 2022, All Rights Reserved

Photograph of Paynes Biker Bar

16 responses to “Wild Ways”

  1. Wonderful vivid scene-setting that really paints a vibrant smoky downtown bar! ❤ Love the back-and-forth banter between them 😀

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    1. Thank you. Yes, it’s hard to make this kind of ridiculousness up. But, it was fun to remember these silly things, and well, you know laugh at myself. Cheers.

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  2. good 😊

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      1. 😊

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  3. Unruly curls employed as a decoy; the cunning ways of flirtatious woman revealed! 🤣

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    1. Oh yes, I’m giving away lots of tricks in this one. 😉

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      1. And I’m noting them all down! 😂

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  4. Fabulous! It feels like a movie. Do movies ever feel like poetry? Maybe some.

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    1. I don’t know, but this scene would be loads of fun. Thank you kindly, worms.

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  5. An epic write, K. “We give our cigarettes a flick,
    toast to things that stick,
    the calvary of age and
    the tactics of our wild ways.” Amazing story and writing.

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    1. Thank you. I was searching all week for my wild ways and it hit me just today this story. Happy Friday! 💜🍷

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      1. You’re welcome! Haha. We are all glad it hit you today. 😁 Happy Friday! 💜🍷

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    This is like flash fiction poetry (is that a thing?). Great narrative and atmosphere. Love the sassy dialogue : ‘a loaded gun. “Glad it stung.”

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    1. Why, yes I like that genre description. New tag just created. Thank you; I enjoy the give and that banter.

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