Frozen farm fields,
a birthday cake,
white icing lake,
trees are candles,
blown out wishes,
my age ambles past
fenced in memories;
drink with me without asking why
from a beveled glass sky.
Frozen farm fields,
a birthday cake,
white icing lake,
trees are candles,
blown out wishes,
my age ambles past
fenced in memories;
drink with me without asking why
from a beveled glass sky.
Yard Sale of Thoughts 
Happy birthday! Your poem captures many emotions.
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Thank you kindly, VJ. It’s not today, but in this season, and this imagery popped out on the way to work.
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Welcome.
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I love your beveled glass sky and I will happily drink with you. Felicitations!🌹
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Prost, Hobbo. My birthday isn’t today, but we certainly don’t need a reason to have a cold bevie. Many thanks. 🍻
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Cheers! Sante! Slainte!
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Happy birthday, K! Wonderful chilly images that compliment such a magical day! Beautifully written 😀
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It’s a very, very unbirthday to me today, and naughty of me to own these lines without thinking how it appeared today was my big day. Cheers always, and thank you!
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Still the perfect season for it! 😀 Hope you have lovely weather for the big day! ❤
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Thank you, Tom. One year, my wish was that it would be warm on my birthday. Yep, that’s yet to be the case. Maybe I’ll plan a warm weather birthday excursion on of these years.
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Cheers! And Happy Winter Birthday! ❄️
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I’m so terrible. Wrote this on my way to work and I’m just now realizing that it totally makes the appearance of my birthday. Well, it is the right season, so I say thank you kindly, Ingrid and sorry about the confusion.
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Well, Happy Birthday for when it comes around anyway 🤣
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I like the pared down imagery of this one, its sad optimism, that killer penultimate line —
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Thanks, John. Lots of driving ideas and takin in the season. I appreciate your kind comments.
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Beautiful!
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Thanks you. 😊
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Stark and vibrant concurrently!
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Thanks. It’s crisp today, for sure.
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What a gorgeous write, K. Beveled glass is perfect.
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Happy birthday winter which you are born in and I love and I wish you happy summer when I was born in June and which I don’t like 😂
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😂
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very very good
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Ty 😃
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