It started when we touched,
a twitching, aching burn.
The freezing warmth
of our final embrace.
I traced your image
on my lawn,
my snow angel.
Then, removed my cast
of clothes
to lie starkly
in your image.
Thrusting my bare,
bruised arms
into the hot numbness
of your empty wings.
I beat them one last time
before rolling over
the white memory.
That Christmas,
my snowman melted,
leaving only a ring:
a very green promise
because December
is a long way from spring.
Wonderful piece, K. Great image and song too.💕❤️💕
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you. We had our first frost here today. Bought our first Christmas presents. Seemed the right time for this one to be posted.
LikeLiked by 1 person
My pleasure. That’s so cool. Enjoy it!!💕❤️💕
LikeLike
great imagery; what do you call those phrases like ‘freezing warmth’? love ‘my cast of clothes’
LikeLiked by 1 person
oxymoron for the opposites, no? Cast of clothes-like a double entendre? Not sure. Just enjoy playing with words too much, I think.
LikeLike
oxymoron, that’s it! I’m writing a poem like that now: just playing with words: it’s fun, but don’t let it outrun meaning 🙂
LikeLiked by 1 person
Wow, K., I agree with Grace. A stunning piece. I love the imagery and feeling of removing my cast of clothes…beautiful poem.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you kindly, Jeff. Wintertime is definitely brutal. But, I look forward to the quiet evenings to find more time to write.
LikeLiked by 1 person
You’re most welcome, K. While the weather here is simply full of lots and lots of rain, I do enjoy the quietness…is nice for writing.
LikeLike
Snow already? Too early, ¿no? But this one is lovely indeed. It’s full of warmth. Thanks for sharing. Lovely.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you, Selma. First frost here this morning. Photo is last winter, my daughters snow angel.
LikeLike
Lovely. Thanks for sharing. 👏
LikeLike
Beautiful. Haunting. Great imagery and I loved your use of words.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you. Jack Frost here this morning. He wastes no time. 😉
LikeLiked by 1 person
Powerful stuff, K!
LikeLike
I love this piece. At first, I read the second line as ‘a twitching, aching bum!’ Time for some more coffee I think! 😂
LikeLike