I forget the misty sunset
the unexpected wet
slick pavement of regret
a damp night I won’t forget.

I miss the wipers’ wave
the downpour misbehaves
tickling on my face
the pinpricks of embrace.

I pine for random streaks
lightning’s thick obliques
the down comforter clouds
grant us permission to be loud.

I miss night’s sodden slur
nature’s slinky shower purr
a raven river in the sky
we wade and then drip-dry.

The random rumbles below
stringed luminescent show
crochet of foreplay for
tomorrow’s sunny day.

© khartless 2021, All Rights Reserved 


This poem is in response to last week’s Flashback Track #30-Excerpt from aTeenage Opera that asks us to “tell us about something you miss.”

Artwork: “Lightning Sky” by Tsyhypko Olga

13 responses to “I Love A Rainy Night”

  1. Eddy Rabbit popped right into my head when reading your title. I’ve been around for a while!

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    1. It’s a great song. 😉

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      1. Good memories!

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  2. hopefully the storm changedthe canvas.

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  3. This is beautifully musical!

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    1. Thanks, Ingrid. Wishing for the rainy nights. Stifling here.

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      1. May you get some soon! 🌧 Are you still in Munich? The temperature is quite pleasant in Slovenia now!

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      2. No, I’m in in Virginia. Muggy and mid-summer here.

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      3. Ah – that’s a bit different! 😅

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    2. that is literally what I was going to write – musical and beautiful!


      David

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      1. Thank you, David. Penned on a perfectly stormy night. I do love the summer storms.

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  4. That penultimate verse blew me away with its lyrical imagery!👏🙂

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  5. Many thanks, Hobbo. Stormy again this evening. I could never get used to this light show.

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