I forget the misty sunset
the unexpected wet
slick pavement of regret
a damp night I won’t forget.
I miss the wipers’ wave
the downpour misbehaves
tickling on my face
the pinpricks of embrace.
I pine for random streaks
lightning’s thick obliques
the down comforter clouds
grant us permission to be loud.
I miss night’s sodden slur
nature’s slinky shower purr
a raven river in the sky
we wade and then drip-dry.
The random rumbles below
stringed luminescent show
crochet of foreplay for
tomorrow’s sunny day.
© khartless 2021, All Rights Reserved
This poem is in response to last week’s Flashback Track #30-Excerpt from aTeenage Opera that asks us to “tell us about something you miss.”
Artwork: “Lightning Sky” by Tsyhypko Olga
Eddy Rabbit popped right into my head when reading your title. I’ve been around for a while!
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It’s a great song. 😉
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Good memories!
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hopefully the storm changedthe canvas.
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This is beautifully musical!
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Thanks, Ingrid. Wishing for the rainy nights. Stifling here.
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May you get some soon! 🌧 Are you still in Munich? The temperature is quite pleasant in Slovenia now!
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No, I’m in in Virginia. Muggy and mid-summer here.
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Ah – that’s a bit different! 😅
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that is literally what I was going to write – musical and beautiful!
❤
David
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Thank you, David. Penned on a perfectly stormy night. I do love the summer storms.
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That penultimate verse blew me away with its lyrical imagery!👏🙂
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Many thanks, Hobbo. Stormy again this evening. I could never get used to this light show.
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