Wine Bar by Mike Daneshi

Wine bar

zig-zag lights

industrial soft white

metal and the open door of night.

In Germany,

I dream in grey,

an homage to the wall days

and even buried deep

in the Bavarian heart

I’m afraid–

never know what Mutti’ll say:

a different rule,

a different day.

But when you grow up on rations

you don’t know a feast,

which can taste like a wine bar

date with yourself after weeks.

The chatter a bit like clucking hens,

hooks without grins,

and grey goodbyes.

It’s Germany,

so I won’t dare cry.

© khartless 2021, All Rights Reserved

19 responses to “Das Wienheim”

  1. An interesting take on German night life. 🙂

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    1. Thank you. I experience it so rarely with my two littles. Tonight, a special treat.

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    1. Thank you, Grace. Feeling loved and loving myself this evening.

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      1. Yesss!!!🙌🙌Hope it transcends into every passing day.💕

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  2. Great imagery. Lovely read.

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  3. Am I hearing a tinge of sadness, though?

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    1. Just a slight undertone. It’s easily swallowed.

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  4. love the imagery in this, the history it covers —

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    1. Thank you, John. This was my my first artist’s date with myself since Corona. Wrote in my novel and also penned this verse.

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      1. you’re doing well 🙂

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      2. Thank you, John. Feels like I’m water skiing by.

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  5. Brilliant! I love the flow of this and the unusual imagery. Really enjoyed 😊 🍷🙏

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    1. Thank you, Ingrid. Taking in the new freedoms of dining inside and being out without the children.

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