Lake Sarnen, Switzerland

Fell asleep

beneath your fallen boughs,

woke with luck at

dusk.

The thickest air,

my private patio,

your fallen black and blue,

a perfect towel,

for lounging

in the setting sun,

my pool.

Forgetting pride,

within your shadow

I reveal what poets

hide.

My verse,

a final minty kiss

on scarred higher ground.

My hands

caress the hillside’s

flushed, sunburnt neck.

Then, I turn and face,

a blossoming sunset.

21 responses to “Blossoming Sunset”

  1. I love the line about revealing what poets hide, but Dauphy now wants to know what I am hiding from him!

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    1. So does my partner, hmm, maybe we should tell them? No, there are some things poets must keep to themselves, I suppose.

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  2. You can’t beat a sunset over the alps!

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    1. It’s so true. Magical all day, but that time in particular, casts its spell.

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      1. I was lucky enough to see this from a bathtub once 😊

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      2. That sounds spectacular.

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      3. It was! We have alps in Slovenia too which is quite convenient 😃

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      4. I’d love to visit Slovenia and take in some of the sights you’ve shared. Let’s hope for an open border summer.

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      5. Yes, I’m hoping that too. I’d like to get home and see the folks!

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  3. What a beautiful poem. I just love it!

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    1. Thank you very much. I loved that view. Just wanted to sit and stare at it as the day came and went.

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  4. You had me until I read “sunburn”. This is one of your fantasy pieces, isn’t it?

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    1. I actually got a bit burned on the porch this weekend. Hazard of napping in the hammock, I suppose.

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      1. Did you place the hammock under a lens?

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      2. It was very bright there; I think the altitude put me closer to the sun.

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      3. that must have been it. Just as well you did not try to fly anywhere, else you would have melted!

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  5. beautiful and calming —

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    1. Thank you. I miss it already.

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