
I found you a top a wooden barstool
past last call, boughs bent rough by rain.
You asked me if you had a chance,
desperation condensing on your glass.
I gave your amber arms a glance,
sculpted mountains above a plunge pool.
I waterfalled down your swirling lagoon,
feelings flowing across my frame,
My body, a branching cataract,
moist in the mystery of a rapid romance,
cascading by islets, eyes that attract,
to board last brave and buoyant pontoon.
Another incredible poem. Just beautiful ❤️.
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Thank you. 😊Your comment has me grinning and super happy. 🍷cheers!
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Totally deserved. 🙂
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Brilliant 🖤
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Thank you. 😀
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You’re most welcome my friend 🖤
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Do I need to tell you? You’ve raised the bar again!
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Thank you; whittled this one, unsure of what it would become. Pleased you enjoyed.
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Ooooo-la-laaaa !!!
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Thanks😊
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racy, rich and riotous 🙂
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Roared, then? Thanks, John.
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[…] Be sure to check out my other recent waterfall poem: After-Hours Avalanche […]
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