March 9, 2021 K. Hartless

TWT—Driving Delusion

“Cliffs of Moher” by Roman Burgman

Prompt: Fantasy

Toes shovel sand amidst the ocean’s endless highway. Unscalable cliffs shield our lucky combinations; I press the window up, silence.

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Mister Bump UK says:

March 9, 2021 at 19: 46

shovelling.. love it.

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johnlmalone says:

March 9, 2021 at 22: 19

I love the phrase: ‘lucky combinations’ : so suggestive. concealing so much —

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- K.Hartless says:
  
  March 9, 2021 at 22: 21
  
  Thank you, John. Had to kill a couple darlings to arrive at that final image. But, I like how it leaves a lot to the imagination.
  
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  - johnlmalone says:
    
    March 9, 2021 at 22: 23
    
    definitely; you did well to follow your instincts: the poem is much stronger for saying so little —
    
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  - K.Hartless says:
    
    March 9, 2021 at 22: 24
    
    Merci beaucoup
    
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